Cobblestone Count
Sidewalk cafe,deserted around me.Shutters hang, move slightlywith the sound of age.The street, mostly deserted,beckons to the night people.Clouds fade in gloom,puffs dissipate as windblows them into...
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Yes, you paint this scene so well with words. Hope you weren't too angry with him!lol'Love beauty, it is the shadow of God on the universe.'-Gabriela Mistral
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Hi Jean,Relief and anger in my minds eye.SharonMyArchive'sNestling's Forums
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This is beautiful and a real mood setting piece, Sharon. So well done!Jared
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If you would allow me to juxtapose ? I do not normally do such a thing...but have some urge to do so. wind dissipates in quick puffs bumping into each other on the street.Inside PostpoemsAlso, would...
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Hi to all, Jean, Jared, Deborah, moonchild and doll.Your comments overwhelm me. Thank you. I love the contests, write a poem about this picture. I really seems to work for me. I have always seemed to...
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Deb,Thanks for the second look at the line.I copied it down and will give it another look.SharonMyArchive'sNestling's Forums
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Deborah,Thanks for the suggestion but somehow this just doesn't work for me.The clouds are dissipating not the wind.Your lines, wind dissipates in quick puffsbumping into each other on the street.I'll...
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I could just see some chic parisian beauty discreetly peeping out the window waiting for him to come so she could arrive chicly late. Ha! Pleased and angry. I like that a lot. Great poem!-Rachel
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Hi Rachel,I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Thank you.SharonMyArchive'sNestling's Forums
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This will be published in "Some Words", July issue, 2001.My thanks to all who gave such excellent advice.SharonMyArchive'sNestling's Forums
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